The Sun is a snake curled up and is glowing yellow gold.
The Wind is a whirl pool sucking the clouds in.
The Rain is small rippling pepbles with a plop at the end.
The Snow is small bits of silk sliding and slivering in the wind.
The Sky is swaying amongst the misty trees.
The Clouds are cuddly cushions pushing through the sky.
The Sea is silk swaying or smashing to the shour.
The Thunder is thumping and thudding and booming out loud.
The Lightning is listning to the thunder and the Lightning is striking away.
By Casey 
Great poem Casey. I especially the curled up snake and the lightning listening to the thunder.
Mr Ball
i really like your poem casey its got loads of similes in it and you put it the wind IS a whirl pool sucking up the clouds WELL DONE! casey
By Kirstie
I really like it a lot lots of simles