Comments on: Poems http://www.weblog.mundesleyjuniorschool.com/2010/02/06/poems/ 4/5BH's Writing Journal Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:48:31 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: The Twits http://www.weblog.mundesleyjuniorschool.com/2010/02/06/poems/comment-page-1/#comment-133 The Twits Fri, 12 Feb 2010 09:15:56 +0000 http://www.weblog.mundesleyjuniorschool.com/?p=515#comment-133 I really like it a lot lots of simles I really like it a lot lots of simles

]]> By: The Twits http://www.weblog.mundesleyjuniorschool.com/2010/02/06/poems/comment-page-1/#comment-131 The Twits Mon, 08 Feb 2010 18:43:06 +0000 http://www.weblog.mundesleyjuniorschool.com/?p=515#comment-131 i really like your poem casey its got loads of similes in it and you put it the wind IS a whirl pool sucking up the clouds WELL DONE! casey By Kirstie i really like your poem casey its got loads of similes in it and you put it the wind IS a whirl pool sucking up the clouds WELL DONE! casey

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]]> By: Mr Ball http://www.weblog.mundesleyjuniorschool.com/2010/02/06/poems/comment-page-1/#comment-126 Mr Ball Sat, 06 Feb 2010 11:04:34 +0000 http://www.weblog.mundesleyjuniorschool.com/?p=515#comment-126 Great poem Casey. I especially the curled up snake and the lightning listening to the thunder. Mr Ball Great poem Casey. I especially the curled up snake and the lightning listening to the thunder.

Mr Ball

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