once there was a boy called Jeff he needed the loo so he put his hand up and the teacher whispered”go then”
so then he was doodling down the corridor until he saw the toliets AND GUESS WHAT HE DONE! he went into the girls bathroom and saw lorrie and she said “hello jeff what you doing in here”
he said” im going to the toliet”
lorrie said”OH NO YOU ARENT GET OUT OF HERE”
so off went Jeff to the boys toliets and had th loo there
UNTIL he went back to class and saw lorrie and lorrie started laughing at him and told her friends that she saw Jeff in the girls bathroom and her friends started laughing as well he felt dissipointed BLESS HIS HEART
BY JESSICA







i dont think it is order
jessica
WOW! Jessica i really like your piece of writing you wrote it was funny. well done jessica.
from megan.
i really really like your poem jessica and its telling you about how some of them feel Well Done
By Kirstie
thanks
jessica
very very good charlotte
Thanks but i made a knew versing so u can comment on that instead so thanks for the comment anyway but my new versing is jessicas new jeff entering the girl bathroom
jessica