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Jessicas new version of jeff entering the girls bathroomOnce there was a boy called Jeff.He was a very naughty boy + a lier.He desprately needed the loo so he put his hand up + the teacher came to him and she said“yes Jeff what can i do for you”.He said“can i go to the loo please”.The teacher whispered “Of course you can Jeff”.So off went Jeff out of the classroom when he went the teacher looked at his work and thought“Jeff is a clever boy but he hasn’t done enough work”.Anyway back to the story.Jeff was walking down the corridor until he saw the toilets AND GUESS WHAT HE DID.He went into the wrong toliets instead of going in the boys he went into the girls and saw lorrie.“Oh hi Jeff what are you doing”.“Im going for the loo im desprate”said Jeff .“Oh no your not (blocking the door) I don ‘t care if you wet yourself can’t you reade it says GIRLS BATHROOM”.“Oh im ever so sorry”said Jeff .“Don’t say sorry to me just GET OUT”said lorrie.“S-Sorry”cried Jeff.Off went Jeff back to the boys toliet he was walking zig – zag ways until he got to the boys and went to the loo.When he came back to class the teacher shouted “GET HERE NOW JEFF”.Jeff got upset + started getting more upset .Then lorrie started laughing and told her friends and they started laughing as well.The teacher asked Jeff “why did he take forever”.Jeff said “i went into the wrong toliets i went into the girls “.The class started laughing as well Jeff felt ashamed of himself.BLESS HIS HEART.BY JESSICA2 comments to Jessicas new version of jeff entering the girls bathroomYou must be logged in to post a comment. |
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Terrific Jessica. Well done. I laughed all the way to the end.
Mr Ball
Thanks Mr ball i took 1hour 30 min
Jessica