Alone in a gloomy dark room sits an elderly man. His only company was a dusty, black, posh piano.While he plays the piano he has a miracle flash backs . His fingers beccome younger as they run over the ebony keys. While he plays, a light shines apon him. The music that he plays lightens the room and his heart.
ByMegan And Bethany.
Hello Bethany and Megan i think this is very well described,
also that it describes what was happening when he was playing the piano
and you put some good descriptive words in it to make it sound very good.
well done from
kirstie :]