Mundesley Junior School

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Jeff walked through a door and a girl with red hair and freckle face was washing her hands. “What are you doing here” asked the girl “huh”  Jeff said puzzled. “This is the girls bathroom” screamed the girl jeff ran out and the girl screamed  THERES A BOY IN THE GIRLS BATHROOM These icons link [...]

“AHHHHHH!””Jeff What are you doing in here?” said Lorrie “Ohhhh no!”said Jeff.(embaressed) “Hey everybody!There’s a boy in the girls bathroom.” All the girls said   “I dont belive you!” Whispered the girls. “Come out and look then.” said Lorrie. All the girls came out and screamed from the top of there voices. “AHHHHHHHHHH. Get out [...]

How could you help Jessica improve this piece of writing? Jeff entering the girls bathroom once there was a boy called Jeff he needed the loo so he put his hand up and the teacher whispered”go then” so then he was doodling down the corridor until he saw the toliets AND GUESS WHAT HE DONE! [...]

once there was a boy called Jeff he needed the loo so he put his hand up and the teacher whispered”go then” so then he was doodling down the corridor until he saw the toliets AND GUESS WHAT HE DONE! he went into the girls bathroom and saw lorrie and she said “hello jeff what [...]